Stock of My Work

For my narrative essay, I think I told the story pretty well. Although there were some gaps in between I stuck with the idea of my writing experience and used what I could remember. I think I did pretty well with the details. If I could improve anything, I would probably try to make my narrative flow together more. When I was looking at the topics, the writing one stuck out because I remembered some of the experiences I've had in middle/high school. To start my drafting, I wrote down everything that I remembered about writing. Although I didnt remember how I learned how to write, I still remembered how and why I enjoyed writing. I didn't use photos or graphics for this essay. Most of the feedback I got was good, but I did make a couple of mistakes so I was appreciative of their suggestions. Next time, I would probably try to fill in the gaps (thats if I could remember anything else).